“Mum when can we eat?”
“I don’t know,”
Before they knew it was dark with no food, no bed or shelter, all alone. They both could see a tiny little shadow in the distance but every second it got bigger and bigger and bigger! Both of them were really scared and did not know what to do. Suddenly, there was a flash of light, then, darkness. The shadow in the distance started to make weird noises “ Hooooo, Hoooooo” Suddenly the whole entire shadow disappeared in a quick second.
“Wait a minute, mum look it’s an owl!”
“Oh yeah it is we are so silly.
Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Phinn. I liked the way you built the tension in your text using carefully chosen, descriptive vocabulary. You had been wondering what that tiny shadow had become. I was relieved when it was an owl. I enjoyed reading your writing. 🙏😊